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  • Dopey Web Guy Seeks Feedback On Article/Ad

    You guys wanna give me some feedback on this:

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    I'd be interested to get your opinions on it. Does it work? How would you improve it?
    The cat spread its wings and flew high into the air, hovering to keep pace with them as they moved cautiously toward the city. Then, as they climbed over the rubble of what had once been a gateway and began to make their way through piles of weed-grown masonry, the cat flew to the squat building with the yellow dome upon its roof. It flew twice around the dome and then came back to settle on Jhary's shoulder. - The King of the Swords

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    Very well done, Berry. I would either capitalize or bold or both koofrudi for the entry on Dreamthief's Daughter. Also, for the same entry you have Ulric von Beck instead of Ulric von Bek.
    Yuki says, "Krimson used to be known as Kommando, but he rarely uses that name anymore. Sometimes he appears as Krimson Gray as well. Do not be confused, he still loves cats and bagels."

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    • #3
      Excellent, very pro', as ever.

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      • #4
        well i would have used bigger pics of the covers and another font and talked about stormbringer as a phallic symbol and :lol: :lol:

        Dude, your site is better than any fan site or writer's official page on the web. The design is clean and pro. The articles are intelligent, interesting and they don't even have the odd typo . The archive is f*in huge - has pretty everything , just as the image gallery. It's run in a way that makes me wonder when you sleep. It's updated frequently. The community is as active as it gets. The big guy himself is addicted to it 8O

        The only way it could get any better is by banning me from the forum
        :lol:


        please don't

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        • #5
          Originally posted by Kommando
          you have Ulric von Beck instead of Ulric von Bek.
          ok, maybe it does have the odd typo...

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          • #6
            fixed

            thanks

            cheers

            etc
            The cat spread its wings and flew high into the air, hovering to keep pace with them as they moved cautiously toward the city. Then, as they climbed over the rubble of what had once been a gateway and began to make their way through piles of weed-grown masonry, the cat flew to the squat building with the yellow dome upon its roof. It flew twice around the dome and then came back to settle on Jhary's shoulder. - The King of the Swords

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